I liked the part where the mother rex decided to not harm the other dinosaurs because they had babies. I can't wait for some more pages! I wanted to see if they got reunited with the father and the babies.
Although it wasn't part of the script I squeezed it in because felt it would be a good precursor and a painful contrast to the tragedy that follows when it comes to his own babies. It was also to explain to the reader that they are in his mind and he is making his way back to them after being washed away in the preceding melee.